I am Year 7 student at Wesley Intermediate School in Auckland, NZ. I am a member of Power Hive 8 and my teacher is Mr V.
Friday, 12 June 2015
six sentence story
this is my six sentence story i hope you like it.
Once upon a time there was a creative man called Sam
He lived in a big cave in a huge village in the town
Sam’s special talent was thinking of good ideas and creating them
His problem was trying to make something better than the last one
Whenever he makes things that he think of he has to start again and it makes him feel angry
Sam solved the problem by asking a artist to help him with his ideas
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Nice work Wailun, I like your descriptiveness in your story. Your story need full stops at the end of the sentences though, but very nice work. :)
ReplyDeleteNice work Wailun, I like your descriptiveness in your story. Your story need full stops at the end of the sentences though, but very nice work. :)
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