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Friday, 12 June 2015

six sentence story

this is my six sentence story i hope you like it. Once upon a time there was a creative man called Sam He lived in a big cave in a huge village in the town Sam’s special talent was thinking of good ideas and creating them His problem was trying to make something better than the last one Whenever he makes things that he think of he has to start again and it makes him feel angry Sam solved the problem by asking a artist to help him with his ideas

2 comments:

  1. Nice work Wailun, I like your descriptiveness in your story. Your story need full stops at the end of the sentences though, but very nice work. :)

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  2. Nice work Wailun, I like your descriptiveness in your story. Your story need full stops at the end of the sentences though, but very nice work. :)

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