my narrative stroy

for writing we were doing narrative and i hope you enjoy Once upon a time was a boy called crypton who lived in a town called atlantis city because there was once a city that was here before but now it is in the sea.One day crypton and family was at home getting ready for school”im ready to go now” said crypton so off they went in the car to atlantis school.Meanwhile at school crypton and his friend rocky were in class with some speacial kids becauce our class has different powers like rocky has earth crypton has ice and I have sky powers and the other two have fire and water and we were learning how to use our powers so we can use our powers because all of us can fly.Why because we need to be ready for anyone who acttacks us