I am Year 7 student at Wesley Intermediate School in Auckland, NZ. I am a member of Power Hive 8 and my teacher is Mr V.
Monday, 29 June 2015
My story in progress
Once upon a time was a boy called crypton who lived in a town called Atlantis city because there was once a city that was here before but now it is in the sea.One day crypton and family was at home getting ready for school”im ready to go now” said crypton so off they went in the car to Atlantis school.Meanwhile at school crypton and his friend rocky were in class with some special kids because our class has different powers like rocky has earth crypton has ice and shadow have sky powers and the other two have fire and water and we were learning how to use our powers so we can use our powers because all of us can fly.Why because we need to be ready for anyone who attacks us from a long way.
This is story in progress so please read my story and see if you like it.
Wednesday, 24 June 2015
Tuesday, 23 June 2015
Friday, 12 June 2015
six sentence story
this is my six sentence story i hope you like it.
Once upon a time there was a creative man called Sam
He lived in a big cave in a huge village in the town
Sam’s special talent was thinking of good ideas and creating them
His problem was trying to make something better than the last one
Whenever he makes things that he think of he has to start again and it makes him feel angry
Sam solved the problem by asking a artist to help him with his ideas
Thursday, 11 June 2015
my narrative stroy
for writing we were doing narrative and i hope you enjoy
Once upon a time was a boy called crypton who lived in a town called atlantis city because there was once a city that was here before but now it is in the sea.One day crypton and family was at home getting ready for school”im ready to go now” said crypton so off they went in the car to atlantis school.Meanwhile at school crypton and his friend rocky were in class with some speacial kids becauce our class has different powers like rocky has earth crypton has ice and I have sky powers and the other two have fire and water and we were learning how to use our powers so we can use our powers because all of us can fly.Why because we need to be ready for anyone who acttacks us
Wednesday, 10 June 2015
Blog Commenting
This is my blog commenting slideshow. James came in and showed us the three part comment system to create effective online relationships. I hope you like my work, please feel free to leave feedback.
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